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Post by Spider-Man Beyond on Feb 9, 2007 22:13:31 GMT -5
Supernaturals #1:
"The supernatural exists." Watch as a team of individuals with special gifts team up to go after the things that go bump in the night.
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Post by Spider-Man Beyond on Feb 9, 2007 22:15:28 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this. Nice start up. One minor gripe was that Sara so readily accepts their story, but aside from that very good
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Post by Glippernip on Feb 10, 2007 7:26:41 GMT -5
Wow. Very dark and menacing. Still, it is paced well, draws you in right away, and leaves you wanting to read a little more. Kudos to our first Originals entry! It will be veerrrry interesting to see how we can mesh our sections of this continuity!
Joel S.
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Post by rodan on Feb 10, 2007 9:51:23 GMT -5
I like it so far, want to know what happens as well.
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Post by circe55 on Feb 10, 2007 22:00:38 GMT -5
Hey Thomas!
I just read Supernaturals #1. Wow this was really great! I found the writing style to be much different from your Uncanny X-Men title.
The beginning was well done (the scene with Jon and his parents in the car).
Nice set up and reveal letting us know Jon is someone special as the story progresses.
The tale itself is moody and dark, I love that! It's like Castlevania, Harry Potter, Van Helsing, all combined. Really nice job.
My only real complaint here is the Sara thing. As Dan pointed out, I feel she not only found out too quickly but that she accepted the story and instantly wanted to join them. It's a bit unrealistic that she wouldn't even be a bit scared.
Also, the ending. Again, Sara rushes in and starts fighting a vampire?! Why would she do this? Again, she's not even the least bit scared? Surely this is the first time she's seen a vampire.
If I ignored the Sara parts, the rest of the story was excellent! Just work on more realistic reactions especially for newcomers to magic and monsters like Sara.
All in all, you're starting the Camelot section off with a bang! I'll definitely be reading the next issue!
-Dean
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Post by jtisthekey on Feb 11, 2007 17:39:57 GMT -5
Good job Thomas, i like everything about the story. The only thing that caught me by surprise is how Dean didn't flip-out about some of the grammar errors that slipped through (LOL). Keep up the good work and I'll be reading.
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Post by fan4 on Feb 12, 2007 13:27:42 GMT -5
A very nice beginning to our Camelot section. This was a good, dark, fast-paced tale and a worthy start to this title. Unfortunately for me, the other readers here have touched on the points I would make, such as Sara's behavior, so I can't add anything original here. Suffice it to say you'll definitely have me reading next issue.
I've been looking forward to reading the Camelot titles and so far, so good.
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Post by royharper on Feb 12, 2007 14:26:23 GMT -5
It felt a little rushed but I really enjoyed it. I saw story to be spun off it. I like the the direction it seems to be going. Maybe one day you'll let me write a spin off?  |
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Post by circe55 on Feb 12, 2007 15:25:10 GMT -5
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Post by jtisthekey on Feb 12, 2007 16:01:09 GMT -5
and you call yourself a perfectionist...
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Post by circe55 on Feb 12, 2007 16:29:04 GMT -5
and you call yourself a perfectionist...  ~~~~~~ ((My apologies to Thomas for hijacking his feedback thread!))-Dean |
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Post by Nygfan on Feb 13, 2007 10:45:45 GMT -5
Good start...I like the concept of the Supernaturals, but I have to echo some of the sentiments above me.....Rushed comes to mind......all that occurred in this one issue could have taken at least two and set things up slower.....I'm guessing you were excited about the original concept and wanted to get as much out as you could....which I completely understand....Like the ending, didn't see her getting bit......Overall great concept and will be reading for more, just watch the pacing...we're not going anywhere...no rush.....
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Post by runaway22 on Feb 13, 2007 21:58:02 GMT -5
Theirs a retalliation in the second part. ;D
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Post by sunwolf on Feb 14, 2007 5:35:15 GMT -5
just stopping in for a quick note to say overall I liked I will be reading more (but why is it that sara didnt dodge the first spell with the paper work?)
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Post by Spider-Man Beyond on Mar 7, 2007 17:34:09 GMT -5
Supernaturals #2:
The explosive conclusion to the Hellsing Vampire! Being bitten by a vampire change Sara's life forever.
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