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Post by Spider-Man Beyond on May 15, 2007 15:44:44 GMT -5
Darkeye #3:
Darkeye meets his first superpowered opponent and takes the battle to the streets of Braughton. But has he met his match in the man called Hammerdown?
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Post by royharper on May 16, 2007 9:15:52 GMT -5
I'm really into this character. I like your writing and I find Jack interesting. It's very easy for me to relate with him. You've done an excellent job of humanizing this character. I'm glad to finally meet Jill. I know Jack can take that thug he just wasn't ready for anyone to that powerful. Rematch Jack kicks his ass.
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Post by Glippernip on May 28, 2007 21:13:25 GMT -5
Finally took the time to read this. Darkeye is so far an intriguing character. I would have liked to have learned more about Jack personally, but still it is early in the series and we do need to learn more about the world he is in (or his part of the world). I liked the fight with Hammerdown, it really had the feel of a newer world of supers who really aren't used to running into each other. I do love the style of the writing here, the intense inside his head point of view. Not just first person, but somewhat reflective, 'what the hell am I doing' first person. Keep it up, my friend. This is a very enjoyable series so far.
Joel S.
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